What is your opinion?
Does It HAVE To Be Over?
"I fell in love with this story from the first sentence. It was written beautifully, there were some grammatical errors, but besides that it was awesome. I cried every time I read the last chapter. I read the last chapter seven times. I don't want it to be over."
Well thought out.
"I never knew that one of my favourite childhood cartoons could turn into such a beautiful story. Tho there are many grammatical errors and writing errors, this story warmed my heart to 100%. I would definitely want this book to get published and I would also buy it. It’s amazing character development and plot gives reader something to hold onto and not get bored easily. It’s a addictive story. One that stirs something within you. One that makes you think. One that makes you question yourself. One that has a good view on what’s wrong with this world. And it’s very well thought out. The author has done an amazing job on research before writing everything up. It’s touched me a great amount because I’ve been through many similar things though not in all. I’d recommend this story to those who have a deep emotional understanding and want to explore more in understanding different faces of human nature that are well thought out here. A great amount of time well spent. "
OMG
"Thank god I found you. Last night I caught up on the other site and saw that people were having trouble finding you.I was so sad at the thought of not finishing the story. I look forward to more. ~ Zephyrrine"
Fascinating
"Chapter One: Not much is happening in this chapter, but I was absolutely fascinated by the depth of your character development. I love how you just sat there with the reader and explored Eddward. Usually, that sort of thing gets boring very fast, but this was actually really cool! He's so unique and different from most male main characters that you would expect! The plot is unclear right now, but you've got a great main character to start out with. The writing style was simple but evocative. I ran into numerous typos and grammatical errors. You may want to try to clean it up a little, just to give the reader a more seamless ride. All in all, this is a good first chapter, and I'm interested in seeing where this goes. Good work!"
interesting
"I also noticed some grammar errors, it is a little difficult to follow. In some areas you jumped around and it was difficult to read. Needs some more work to make everything flow smoothly. The characters needs some work."
questionable
"i personally haven't finished the book, but it would be better if you had more paragraphs because it's hard to take in what's happening cause' it comes in big chunks, not really my style of writing. hopefully the rest to the book is amazing!"
