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Interesting.

"Good job with the prologue. It keeps people hooked and wanting to know what comes next. The plot of this book seems really interesting and it started with a bang. Nice work!"

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Stone of Vengence

"Story is really interesting, like the idea of nobility and royals in a modern setting like this. Well structured and some really good descriptions. Only faults are a few spelling mistakes, which are easy fixes and not damaging to the plot, and that it was quite short, but that might just be because it's just a prologue so far. Keep it up, am interested to see where it goes."

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Modern monarchy

"I don't think I've ever seen a story of royal intrigue in a modern setting. Looking forward to how you build this world and how factions make use of modern technology while grappling for power. Aside from a few grammatical errors that could very well just be typos, I liked the writing. The first chapter was vague and (based on the blurb) doesn't seem too connected to the main story, but it drew me in enough to the point where I'll probably read the next chapter."

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Easy to read

"I really like your descriptive​ words, one thing I'm terrible at and you've caught my attention straight away."

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