Dystopian, sci-fi action

"This story follows two main characters, Zoey and Derek, on a winding adventure that sucks you in from the beginning. It was easy to get into and get a feel for the world that the author is projecting, as well as all of the warring factions and difference of ideals that would otherwise be very complicated to be able to package up and deliver. You can't help but keep reading, to see what else the characters will undoubtedly get into. The many different people that you meet in the story aren't always what they initially seem, and be prepared for favorites as well as character death. The only thing that I would have liked to see more of is grammar/spelling edits, as it seems like the story is peppered with typos that I think would have been easily solved with a beta combing through the work. Even with that as a hindsight, I finished and thoroughly enjoyed the story. I'm waiting for the sequel!"

Review

"Hey there, i have started reading your story and i pretty much was hooked. what I liked the most was the progression of it, meaning that when the main character expresses feelings of rejection of pity and when you feel that he is not content but the need of work overwhelming his other sentiments, well i found that i could relate to this. overall, good chapter. i would have liked for the plot to be faster but i can understand the need to establish your character's personalities and project them from your mind onto the typing. Keep up the good work."

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