What is your opinion?
A good read!
"I love biker stories so this was great! Good characters, and really descriptive language makes everything really easy to visualize. There were some grammar issues that could be distracting at times, but overall, a good story!"
Smooth Ride
"I like the story. Your writing style is descriptive and flows easily. There are some grammatical errors. Great work!!"
Beauty and the Beasts
"Smooth Rides is a story about Beauty trying to survive a threat trying to kill her and her own love life. Beauty's character is a very typical strong and feisty leading woman. However the author uses this as a base to build Beauty's character. In key moments littered around this novel it is shown that she has a more vulnerable side of her. I do wish to point out that there is a bit of melodrama that occurs. Additionally, there's a sort of sudden emotional changes that happen to Beauty which can be confusing at times. It was like skipping the middle of a plot. I feel like there should have been more build up. Writing wise, I enjoyed your style. There is a bit of run on sentences specifically in first chapter. The sentence in question was her describing her lip gloss. Overall this story has potential and I look forward to see how it goes."
