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What is your opinion?
I LOVE it!
"Interesting and compelling, I am LOVING the way the protagonist is such a witty, brave person, but not cliché-ly. Although this could use some work grammar-wise, I highly suggest Neda Anjum's work. Although I don't quite understand the name, I love the way it is short, snappy and to the point. Do yourself a favour! Read Neda's work and please review! Would you mind reviewing my work? https://www.inkitt.com/stories/adventure/223223 Can't wait to read more, -Adeilda"
Great start!
"I think you're on to a really great start! I would recommend changing the "&" symbol form your first chapter and you tended to repeat some phrases like "most notorious pickpocketer" etc. I can't wait to read more!"
