What is your opinion?
Mesmerizing
"Your writing style was really good. The words mesmerized me. But I feel like there is more. That there could have been more. Does this story have a follow up? Besides this, I still have to say there were some parts that could have been written better, more fluently. I feel like there should have been more showing and more description. Still, a very good story."
Skilled Writing
"Although I found that neither the topic nor the plot drew me in (personal taste), I found the writing to be compelling, even spellbinding. The author has beautiful prose and is a skilled story telling. If for no other reason, I recommend you read this story for the writing."
Brilliant Prose
"I really enjoyed the author's writing style and certainly felt absorbed. SparkyDJ knows how to engage a reader and tell a story. I would certainly read more from this author. I'm surprised that this story is not entered in any contests."
