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Very Sad

"This author is a excellent writer. This book was so sad! The father was so very selfish, and reading made me break into tears. It's hard for books to make me cry. Well done!"

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daddy

"i enjoyed the story and the author writing style was perfect though maybe you need to improve on the story structure"

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Awesome

"At first I wasn’t so sure. I was interested in the idea of the story coming from the perspective of a little girl who, it seems, to have had everything handed to her. I really liked the idea the author was setting up for, but the sudden time skip threw me off, especially when it dove into high school straight away. So at this point, I’m interested for the setting up, and for what’s to come. I may not really like the plot in the middle, where our main character is now the Queen Bee, but was it really unexpected? No. What WAS surprising for me at least, is how... obsessive she is on making other people’s lives hell. But what really got me hooked is how she still hasn’t gotten over her mother’s words and anger (and for me, it’s implied that the Mum is somewhat abusive to the dad) and how her childhood affected her up to this point. It’s sad that some people out there really don’t understand actions have consequences, whether it be the dad suddenly walking out on them and leaving them with little to nothing, the mother influencing five or something year old Olivia to believe that her dad’s new wife and daughter are in the wrong, to the stepmother’s own harassment, to Olivia’s over the top bullying and influence and so forth."

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Daddy

"Love this book, even though I want to punch the dad so bad! Lol"

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Daddy

"This is such a heart touching story. It is so beautiful and it had me so deeply effected emotionally. I love it so much."

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Review

"Olivia breaks my heart. The position that both her mother out her in, is atrocious. Was very excited to read something else by this author, after reading 'Slinthead' and I can say that this lived up to my expectations!"

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Just wow!

"I haven't read the full book yet but I fully intend too! At first, I was a little unsure as it's a style I am not used too however, by the end of Chapter 1, I'm hooked! The thoughts, feelings, and emotions of the child are captured perfectly and written in a way that is completely believable. It is compelling, easy to read and so far each chapter has left in such a way you really want to read on! Amazing!"

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Daddy

"I read this book on Wattpad years years years ago, and. l always loved it. please publish this book I could read it forever and ever"

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Daddy!

"As I began to read and understand what was taking place, my heart broke for Olivia. I could never imagine how it felt to lose your mother, to being thrown into a life where your beaten down. Though she proved to be strong and made it out of that. This book is amazing, expressive, deep, and overall just a great book, to whom everyone needs to read."

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Daddy

"I read up to chapter 5 and I think I fell in love with it as soon as I read more and more. I love the whole plot and the characters I love them. But something I do suggest if to be able to describe the characters faces a little more so while readers read your story they can imagine how they look like as soon as they see the name. But overall I think this story is good!"

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Daddy

"I love this book its so interesting and I love the plot this is my first Inkitt novel and I think this is perfect!"

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