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THE DIAMOND RING

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Summary

It is a story of how two friends Rose and The author went on an adventure in a magical land . It is a story of two friends go on an adventure and fight monsters and pirates and find the treasure.

Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1

The Diamond Ring Once there was a girl named Rose , she was a really kindhearted child and was very pretty and brilliant and there was only one tiny little problem and that was she was so so QUIET !! and she would not even talk even if she was the monitor of the class !! but don't think I was her, but do you know she has every thing to comfort her, means her parents were so rich!!

"But do you know our school bully Robert told something in her ear last month and I'm sure it's something mean and you know how I understood that , the next day itself they went straight to principal's room and Robert was expelled from school and every one was so happy that they made a huge party including the teacher and that was when Rose told me those words in my ear. I was so shocked because this was the first thing she ever told me and do you know what she told me it was "Hi I have a quest my mother told to me .Please come to the beach behind our school we'll meet there and I'll tell you all about it ".
And after school all I was thinking was about it. I even forgot to have my lunch .I almost reached the beach but I slipped and fell down, that 's when I looked back it was Robert !! I was so angry and oh! I'm so sorry I forgot to say he did not get expelled from my village .I dashed out of there and I got a crash with Rose so I knew I would be expelled from my village so before that I apologized to her as fast as I could. She said "Oh no need for apologizing it happens now as we met we could go together "and we got on our way as soon as we reached there Rose opened her bag and we both made the tent and while eating the ice cream,Rose told me all about it.
She said, the quest is there inside that cave. She said pointing to it, "there will be a boat. Its not that big but it can carry two people. So we are going to board it. No need to control it ,it will take us somewhere. From there we'll get the map and we can go according to it and there will be a chest box .Inside the chest box, there will be a diamond ring and that is the treasure. And that is my ancestor's history mark. We need to keep it under the magical tree and that's all we have to do".

So we set on our journey. We removed the tent and cleaned up all our delicious food and headed towards the cave.We boarded the boat and the boat took us to the magical land. It was so beautiful. I almost felt it was a dream. But it was not. Because we saw a monster guarding the treasure map. So Rose told me that we have to fight this monster to get the treasure map. For that we cut of the sward mushroom and murdered the monster. After that we took and opened the treasure map.

We went to many routes and we finally found the treasure chest.We were so happy and slowly danced ...and went near the treasure chest. Suddenly several ships of pirates attacked us . They could not catch us because we were too fast for them. Actually I was the slowest runner in the whole school. Everybody defeated me easily. But when I saw this, I was so happy that I was not that bad at running. As soon as we lifted the chest, the boat came just in front of us. We rushed to it before the pirates. And the boat disappeared.

The boat appeared in front of the magical tree. We placed the chest under the tree as rose told. Then the boat took us to the first cave. We came out of it and that was the end of our adventure. From then on we were best friends and rose started to talk.... not just to me, but to every one....

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