What is your opinion?
Wow
"For a short story this one really grabbed me and got me thinking. I wanted to know where Ai will go from here, and if there is a bigger story to come. I really enjoyed myself, the author has a poetic touch to her writing. Her descriptions of emotions and scenes came to life in my head. This little gem of a story has twists and turns I never saw coming. I urge this author to write, write, write!!! I look forward to more stories from them in the future."
Interesting, captivating
"Hi Elynor, I like your work. It is captivating and has just the right amount of mystery to make it compelling. One suggestion, though, is that it starts off slowly, so it is easy to put it down without thinking too much about it. I suggest you have something a little more of a bang, so it really makes us want to keep reading! Second, I like your cover. You have an interesting, unique name, although perhaps change the font? It put me off in the beginning because I was expecting to read a dreamy, cold, slow novel about a city where it rains a lot. Change the font to something a little more . . . I dunno, 'exciting', because the first impression counts! ; ) Otherwise, I really like your story! Keep up the fantastic work! Would you mind reviewing/voting on my novel?? https://www.inkitt.com/stories/adventure/223223 And thank you for your review on 'Red'!!! -Adeila"
