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The Elite Seven
"This story has a lot of potential for a great novel series. But it definitely needs some work to fix some errors. However, I don't want that to discourage the author, whom has some talent and potential for a good book. I would personally like to suggest looking for and signing up for a grammar aid, such as Grammarly, ProWritingAid, etc. All in all, it is a good start. Please don't give up on your writing."
Great mix of technology and fantasy
"I found this story to be quite intriguing with its mix of technology and fantasy. I feel it has great potential but needs another read through to fix some errors. Your characters are likeable and believable. I think you have a good beginning and urge you to keep writing."
