What is your opinion?
Life is more dramatic then fiction
"I left a bunch of comments. Hope that isn't a problem. I am a fiction writer. I think I lack the courage to write so openly about myself. So let me just commend that aspect. Also you did an excellent job of being concise without any blaming or making excuses. ALSO not an easy thing. I think you should be proud of what you have written. If you want writing tips on how to bring someone into a moment and write fiction, I will gladly work with you. I think you have amazing potential. I have some friends that in recovery and many of the people I love are veterans with PTSD or other serves related disabilities. So if you ever need outside or additional support or prospective drop me a line and we can connect you to more people. I read all the way till the end. For the last chapter a suggestion for the title might be... "Forward.. or Road ahead." I am glad your story doesn't end and I look forward to see what else you write."
Bobby's journey
"Just finished the first chapter, and I'm really liking this. Some of the sentiments expressed are sadly relatable, and this has kept me reading. The simplistic but effective use of language kept me engaged, and I look forward to reading on. Good work! :)"
