What is your opinion?
Phoenix Dai
"I liked the story it's very different and interesting. Pheonix is also very interesting.All the characters in the story are as interesting as pheonix. You have developed the character well and the story is well written. Great work."
Phoenix Dai
"I was honestly intrigued from the very first chapter, I wasn't expecting his family to be that psychotic but it works. Phoenix personality suits him well, bouncing from serious to playful at times lightens the situation he is put in. I can't wait to find out what happens next...."
Pageturning
"This is so good, you can feel Pheonix's panicking when he starts at his new school. To be honest, Pheonix seems like a bit of a git. Pranking his family with those water balloons that were filled with anything but water, getting his friends signed up for that school and not feeling even slightly sorry. But, if you can get your readers to engage with and relate to a less than nice person, you are a brilliant writer. It also gives you the opportunity to maybe develop Pheonix into a nicer character later. Keep up the great work! Sofia"
Keep it up!
"I love how the author keep me guessing of what's going to happen in every chapter. The characters' personalities are different (in a good way), but I can't quite put my fingers on Raqueel and Phoenix's relationship. I don't know, I just think the way they treat each other is more than just best friends. Also, there were some technical mistakes here and there, especially punctuations and in this issue I'd like to highlight on the use of dialog tag. I think it's better to put a dialog tag in every statement being said by the characters, because I was a little bit confused when Phoenix was talking to his father since there were no dialog tag on Amin's statements. Anyway, overall I love how unique this story is. Can't wait to see where this story's heading. Keep up the good work!!"
