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Good Read

"Good characterisation and lovely use of description apparent throughout. I also really liked the plot line. This book has a lot of potential and with a bit of editing, I think it'd be superb :) "

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Elegant

"Very well thought out. I like your attention to detail. Keep up the good work! Also, I would understanding on if your Matella is a male or female. Thanks, and have a great day!"

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A Gripping Read

"Congratulations on a well constructed plot which draws the reader deeper and deeper into the imaginative world you have created. The narrative is exciting and compelling and becomes very real to the reader. Very well done. I look forward to reading more. A thorough edit to ensure consistency of tenses will increase its appeal even more."

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AMA-ZING!!!!

"I loved the descriptiveness of the characters, setting and plot! It all fit together reallyyyy Well! The story was really enjoyable so far, and it really fits out there, and sticks differently than other novels I've read. Goooodddd JOB! I should learn from you!"

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Wow!

"I loved that the story gave an explanation of what happened before the actual time setting. I also enjoyed the fact that Charybdis seems to be on a journey for what seems to be his well being whilst being in conflict emotionally. I absolutely enjoyed it!"

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Okay

"Has potential"

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