What is your opinion?
Love it
"Thi story though short at the current moment is wonderful with a beautiful plot the descriptions are on point. The story is just magical"
Generally good read
"I felt that the characters were interesting. They had compelling personalities that slowly displayed their colors like blooming flowers, revealing themselves one petal at a time. This kept me as a reader invested in the story. I felt that the story began rather abruptly. It would have been nice to see a little background- see what the person meant to wish for originally, maybe even see how she found out about the deals. If not in the beginning then at the very least as a flashback somewhere in the book. I feel this also would have provided the author a fantastic opportunity for inner-dialogue if she had done it, and it would make the readers feel more sympathetic whenever she initially wishes for the wrong thing. Since we don't know what she wanted originally and if it's honorable or personal readers are not provided the opportunity to become emotionally connected to the story. The lack of reflection, inner-dialogue, and background were the only issues I found with the story aside from some minor spelling and grammar issues. Overall this is a good read with some very vivid and stomach-turning descriptions, and enjoyable characters!"
