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Good Beginning
"This is a really good beginning to your story. I like your characters and want to know more about them... I am curious as to exactly how old they are? Also where did the money come to make such a purchase? Maybe the next chapter holds the answers? I urge this writer to continue on and finish this novel I am sure it will make a very interesting read. There were a few spelling mistakes and a couple of missing words, nothing another read through wont fix. Wishing you all the best in your writing future."
Loved it.
"I love your plot and I think ts great"
