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Thought provoking

"Very good, we all live behind our own brick walls, if only we could find away to walk through the door you mention, how different life could be for all of us."

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The Words In Red

"Interesting fantasy, nothing is quite what you expect. It is grabbing on to the next hint, or fact to let you know who exactly Teacher is. I wonder why you chose to end your story where you did. I love your epilogue! You end your epilogue on a sweet and loving note. Overall I believe most readers will come away feeling good. 🌹"

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Wow

"How profound! It left me breathless and enthralled.... You have such amazing story telling skills and creative ideas. It was a pleasure to read. Can't wait to read more from your pen. May your muse be with you and may there be many many more stories to come."

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A story that will hug your soul.

"A beautiful short story that had a lot of love and truth. Long live the Teacher. The story moved my soul. "

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