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Let's help Mommy

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Summary

They were all excited and eager to help out, they each had a hobby or something to do, but not long came an office and the whole community involved.

Genre
Children
Author
Linda G.
Status
8yrs ago
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1

One day mom mother Heather came home from the supermarket and she had alot of bags in the car. Hannah and Hector helped their mom with groceries. That afternoon the kids decided to sell lemonade at the lemonade stand outside they built. Mrs. Green was walking her dog and suddenly she stops by Hello kids how are you today? Asked Mrs green . hello greeted one of the kids we are excited to sell lemonade for a good cause. Oh thats nice said Mrs Green. How much are the drinks? The drinks is for helping mommy. Mommy is having a baby. The drinks are .50 cents a cup said Hannah. Oh thats great said Mrs Green. here is $5.00 for 2 and a half cups. Its for my grandchildren said Mrs. Green. Hello Mrs. Green shouted Heather Hello to you and I heard the good news congrats said Mrs.Green. he he giggled heather, yes there are so excited to help me out. here's your change Mrs. Green $2.50 ; I appreciate it so much said mother Heather . we are very excited said Hector and Hannah. Thank you very much for my little helpers said mother Heather. Dad was working on a job project in the garage. All of a sudden the police drives by to patrol the streets; saying Hello kids says sgrt Hi Mr. policeman said Hannah and Hector. We are selling lemonade for a good cause; mommy is having a baby. So the police called for 2 other volunteers in the police cars hfor elping. Here is $20.00 for 4 cups of lemonade as well. Said the policeman it was a very hot day outside, plus a toy badge for Hector Hannah and the baby; Said one of the other sgrts. You did a good job said Bob the policeman and remember try to stay out of the sun . bye bye now kids sirens went off. As he was leaving.

Minutes later the whole block neighbors came out for some lemonade as well. We all want to helpout .neighbor Eric said outloud. Sarah, Michelle,Lina,Luca, Erica,Mariah,Daniel all helped out with baby clothes ,furniture and diapers. Mother Heather was so overwhelmed and thankful Couldn't ask for anything better. Dad pete announced 50% off the meal at the restaurant where pete works at The end.

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