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The Intrusive Girl

"If you are looking for a tale that will give you a tingle down your spine just in time for Halloween, this is it! The Intrusive Girl is a short ghost story that is far from short on eery descriptions and spooky scenes. Overall, this is a well written tale, with a very creative premise. It is definitely worth a read, and worth every jump and shiver it gives you."

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The Intrusive girl

"I would like to see if you are going to write more "

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