What is your opinion?
Really good!
"A great read with well-thought-out characters and plot."
Amazing book 10/10
"Even though the book only has 6 chapters it says a lot. First of all the chapters are long and the writing style is detailed, I love it. To be honest I had a hard time getting into the first chapter but after that it had me hooked. It’s so real and I love the way the main character acts vs what is expected. The character development was amazing and there is a lot you can learn from this book. Overall so good, would recommend to anyone."
Love at First Sight
"I loved the directness of the affair. Rhys is so patient and deeply in love for the first time. Danny saw what he wanted and moved immediately. After all the physical and emotional trau,a Danny suffered he knew absolutely the direction his life had turned and he pursues it with gusto. So a,axing. "
I love the writing characters and plot
"Love the writing style characters and story"
Loved it!
"I love everything about this story and I’d definitely read it again! Just wish there was a “better” ending as there were a few questions left unanswered and topics untouched."
Little complications
"Great story! Loved reading it! Would recommend "
Awesome
"Very calm but chaotic writing.. Slightly confusing.. Need extensive editing. And need proper space and gaps and proper description. "
Damn
"I loved this book from start to finish. It was beautiful. My favourite part of this book has to be the prologue. How the author introduced us to the life that Danny and his brothers had before they had been adopted, was excellent. They're love was wonderful. It was a six part story but it felt like I was reading a forty part story. I don't regret reading this and I am grateful that I found this book. Recommended to everyone who wants a gay book to read."
Amazing book
"A very good book with the good plot and twist.. Just sometime I got confused when they change POV Nice job author 😃😃"
Little Complications
"Please tell me that's not the end. More please!!! Danny and Rhys are adorable. "
Little Complications
"What a wonderful novel....I didn’t think that this story would make me as emotional as it did. I smiled, laughed, cried tears of sadness, tears of happiness, and just got a warm feeling of pure sincere love between Rhys and Danny. The author deserves every feeling of gratitude from those of us who just loved this. Thank you from the bottom of my heart. The only negative is that it wasn’t longer.....hopefully a sequel? ❤️❤️"
Little Complications
"I thought the structure like the chapters was too long for me the story is about the autism of Danny and the orphanage but the chapters do not help me. I am lost in them,"
Little complications
"Don’t let the small number of chapters fool you, this might be the longest story I’ve ever read. 😂 each chapter is like 3 or 4 chapters from any other story I read. The plot was amazing. Character development was impressive. It’s a new idea that I’ve never seen before, which really made this story very interesting. The ending wasn’t ideal. I didn’t really like it. It was a very open ending and I think it could’ve ended in a better way. But overall, great story. ✨❤️"
Review
"The book so far I like it."
A worth reading
"Love the plot, the characters development but there are some things that can be improve, like separation between two events, when you are to focus on the reading you can get quite confused when you just suddenly entered a new scene. But overall love the story"
Worth the read
"The plot is great and worth the read. My only concerns are; 1) the rapid changes in POVs without a clear indication which character owned the paragraph or sentence. Majority of the dialogues were told by one first speaker but was combined with the action of another speaker. Like when Rhys was speaking about something but his dialogue line wasn't clearly indicated as his and then, Danny's action was put in the same dialogue line. I had to re-read the sentence a few times to figure who was the speaker and who was doing the action. Suggest: "........" Rhys said causing Danny to shrug but the lawyer went on, "......." I know indicating a dialogue line and who speaks them could get really tedious but it could help the reader understands the story better. 2) Try to use Paragraph and makes new line for different speaker. I spotted many of the dialogues of several speakers were combined into one line or Paragraph which is really confusing and messy. The story has potential. It just needs some editing to make it looks understandable and neat. And also, I'm disappointed that the ending just came abruptly. There was no telling what would happen next—whether Danny's family would fully accepted him for who he was, the relationship he had with Rhys and the topic they discussed in the final chapter. The story just died instantly at that. I hope the author could give a clearer ending or maybe you were planning for a second book where the current topic would be the main objective of the sequel. I don't know. It was disappointing to see the book ended abruptly. Despite the ending and the format of the book, this story is worth the read for those who wanted a quick reading. - zhensachiko"
