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Perfect dream love story

"To be honest I am totally inlove with that story and if there was a follow up from like them ten years into the future I would empty my bank account to see it"

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Just a kiss

"I loved everything about it My friends Cause it merits it "

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Great lovestory

"I love this story, it is kind of like a destiny. A lot happens but they win anyway. Conquer every obstacle ❤️"

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Quite a journey

"Really loved how the story went for Tedi and Jack. The complexity of their love story and how they kept having to deal with other people. One thing I would change though is maybe add more to the ending instead of doing a quick wrap up ending. Besides that, it was good."

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Love

"Loved it thanks for this amazing story"

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A LOT!!!!!

"ΤΟ ΛΑΤΡΕΥΩ!!! ΕΧΕΙ ΠΟΛΥ ΩΡΑΙΑ ΠΛΟΚΗ!!! ΝΑΙ ΘΑ ΤΟ ΠΡΟΤΕΙΝΑ ΚΑΙ ΣΕ ΑΛΛΟΥΣ."

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Just a Kiss

"Great story! "

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Ttt

"✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼💖✊🏼💖✊🏼💖✊🏼✊🏼💖✊🏼💖✊🏼"

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Love you dude

"Love this nove"

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Nice story

"Nice plot but could be better but overall a very nice story "

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Nice

"Funny story 😂"

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Amazing

"Love this book ❤️❤️"

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Loved it

"😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😻😻😻😻😻😽😽😽💏💑💋👄💘❤💓💔💕💖💗💙💚💛💜🖤💝💞💟❣💌 iloved all of it but it should of had a step by step ending"

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Oof

"It had a good storyline."

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Good, but room for improvement!

"I really enjoyed this story, but I must say that there are some things that could be worked upon. Maybe, if you ever go back and edit this, try to make the chapters longer and watch for grammatical and punctuational errors. I think that you should have tried to make Tedi a bit stronger and firm in what she says. She bent pretty well when Jack wanted her to forgive him and vice versa. Maybe just have them actually try to work things out instead of having them just apologize and forgive? Also, maybe leave a little more time in between arguments. I know the plot of this story was for them to have a rocky relationship, but maybe just spacing out their spats could help a little. Overall, very good! Great job!"

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Just a kiss

"Very funny story."

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Jst a kiss

"Very funny,"

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Totally weird

"How did it jump from being sorry to having a son? When did the forgiveness come"

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Nice work

"The best part was that it was really funny"

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Book

"The story way very fast paced however a good quick read"

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