What is your opinion?
For Death Survivor
"My story is wrote from the heart I am a creative writer and I can write a bit of anything romance, Horror, Kids books, Erotica, fantasy, Adventure, action like I said a little bit of everything I love to write and I even love reading My story's after writing them, I really love this story because it is possible for Miracles to really happen and I want people to Know that things happen for a reason so please read my story and let me know how you feel about it please I would really appreciate it thanks...?" MAY GOD BLESS ALL! know JESUS LOVES YOU ALL."
Death Survivor
"Death Survivor has a potential to be a great book with a great plotline. The only downsides are the grammar and punctuation. I'm not an expert in this subject either but I do believe that you could do some basic grammar and punctuation such as the usage of period/full stop at the end of every sentence, the use of commas, speech marks for the dialogues. If you can implement these three in your book, then I'd believe that it would make your book looking better and understandable. The excessive usage of Question mark and Capital Letters are very distracting. You wanted to make a dialogue which was spoken by one person but you ended each dialogue with multiples full stops and a question mark even though the sentence wasn't a question. Don't end it with multiple full stops and question mark unless the dialogue is a question itself. You used many Capital Letters in one sentence and it's not hard to figure it out that it's the first letter of the sentence is the only one needed to be capitalized. Suggest: He said, "Maybe this is the one." Wrong: He said Maybe This is The One........? The whole book needs a polishing from the first sentence of the first chapter until the last sentence of the last chapter. "
all caps
"Your story has some lovely vernacular twists in the lines. There is a very conversational flow to it, but it is riddled with grammar and spelling mistakes which is a shame. The poor grammar jolts the reader from the story and i found it difficult to follow what you wanted to say and when. Many of your characters speak in questions..? Be careful that you have a lot of Caps at the beginning of words in the middle of sentences, this could be a formatting issue i'm not sure, but it is very distracting. I would suggest getting a good edit in and really grinding away at some of those passages, because their is a nice seam of jewels hidden. I hope this was helpful, sorry if it is not what you wanted to hear."
