What is your opinion?
Lovely
"Such a lovely story"
Miss
"Very good book"
Wanting You
"I absolutely loved the story. I seen it in my head with all the descriptions. The writing style was amazing and holds your attention. These are the kind of stories that are hard to put down until your done reading. Keep up the amazing work."
Wanting You
"Although a seemingly simple narrative, this emotional conflict between a 15 year old girl and 19 year old guy who has been like a brother is hard to write. The author is succeeding. I would second the previous review and advise proofreading, because sometimes I cannot tell what is meant to be Mia's POV in her words and what is error."
Great!
"I think this story has potential. It was great! "
Yeah
"I like the over all story but it did not give enough detells and it was to short also it was kinda her just crying all the time I felt like."
good try.
"great story Nishi. But somethings need to be taken care of. like, spelling mistakes, grammar and more importantly punctuation. keeping the mistakes apart, regarding the story, it's really good. every chapter make me curious thinking, what will happen next. you can possibly add more emotions between them, how zach and mia feel. overall nice read. And all the best for the future works."
