Back to Story
What is your opinion?
Nice start
"A fairly good start for a story. Makes me curious for what will happen next. I was... disappointed, simply because there were not extra chapters for me to read. The grammar and writing style is good too, actually. I'll be looking forward for more!"
Pretty good, so far!
"The idea sounds really interesting, The first chapter is short, but it grabs your attention long enough to wonder what's going to happen in the next chapter. A couple slight grammatical errors, but overall It's great so far. Keep up the good work!"
