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Working progress

"Wonderful. I hope you guys will like it too"

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Fan

"Love this book can't wait to read more about Adrianna "

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Great Read

"This is a good paced story that is full of action and strong believable characters. That will hook you in and leave you wanting more. I recommend any who like fantasy give this one a read. I urge the writer onward and upward with their writing."

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Seraphina

"This is a wonderful story! The characters and settings are intriguing and the plot interesting and easy to follow. Periodic grammar errors pulled me out of the story a bit, but overall it was a great read. I'd definitely recommend and as a fantasy lover I found it to be a good representation or what I look for in Fantasy. I can tell that the writer is practiced and well-versed in their craft. All in all, very good!"

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Intriguing

"An intriguing piece which transitions between two worlds chapter by chapter, all the while keeping is wanting more information as to what's going on. Looking forward to reading more. The most prevalent issue for me was grammar and punctuation overlooks, so maybe take a look at that. All in all though, a good start :) "

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