What is your opinion?
Someone like you
"I would be lying if I didn't say this book is one of the best I've read. With all the twist and everything, I give the writer a thumbs up. I would definitely recommend it to my friends "
Someone like yoy
"It was awesome. It can be relatable to many people but very sadly not me. I just absolutely love it.!! ☺☺"
Someone like you
"Absolutely beautiful story"
Someone Like You
"I love this story it's so addictive and can't wait for more. Definitely worth reading!"
Update!!
"👌😊😊😍😍"
Someone like you
"I really think this is a great story so far as I’m reading like I can imagine how long it toke you but,it’s all worth it "
Someone like you
"Ita osummm...updates pleaseeeee"
Someone like you
"Such a amazing 😉 book. And well, a cute story and I love 💖 the flaire of writing. "
Nice!
"I love the plot of this story and especially the main characters, including their interactions with each other. There is nice balance between imagery and the setting. Very descriptive and thoughtfully written. Can't wait to read more of it!"
Someone like you
"I really love the characters and how the story was written. It's descriptive and keeps the reader captivated. I love it and can't wait to see where the story goes!"
Nice Work!
"This is a great story it is very addictive and I want to keep reading! A small suggestion, the story would be even stronger if you also focused on enhancing the settings and imagery to balance out the dialogue."
so amazing
"this book is really great so far. there are some grammar mistakes though.if those were fixed then the story would be even greater. I can't wait to read more of it."
Good!
"Very good ideas. Well thought out."
I love it
"This was the best book i ever read and it only took me a day and a half to read "
Someone like you
"It is a great story... I haven't finished yet but am very excited to see how it ends "
I know you're gonna be mad at me and I'm sorry.
"I don't review stories that suck. If you had no talent? Then I just wouldn't comment. This story however, is not ready yet. You're at 2 stars mostly due to poor grammar and some consistent continuity issues. Like: Why the countdown to schools end for each chapter? “Nat parked in her usual spot” in chpt 2. How does Jade know that if it’s only her second day at school. Nat wasn’t able to drive when she left them. Language is stilted. I go here. I get this. I am half hispanic. The way the Abigail thing is handled really makes Jade look like the bad guy here. You need a little more to explain why she is acting the way she is. T=Right now she just comes off as a "B." Ch3 “Jordans advice [about abigail] might be helping.” But Jordan didn’t have any advice for her. Ch 12 Conversation’s like the one she has with her mother about Dan is the kind of thing you want to show not tell. Ch 13 “I drove back to the house.” With what? She doesn’t own a car. Ch14 “Liza came to visit.” Who’s Liza? Remember, we only met Jordan’s mom one time by this point. So, we may need a reminder here. The constant sleeping thing from Ch 11 to Ch 14 is starting to make it look like she has narcolepsy. Now the reason I mention all of that is because? This book could easily be 5 stars if you go back through and correct this stuff. You're right on the cusp of that addictive quality needed for a 5th star. I enjoyed this story but you have more work to do. The good news is. You most certainly have the talent to make this happen."
