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Very intriguing and hooking

"I have been hooked on this book ever since reading the first chapter. The story idea is very unique and interesting, and, in my opinion, was executed wonderfully. There are a few spelling/grammar mistakes here and there, but nothing too noticeable. I am honestly loving this book so far, can't wait to read more! 💗"

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got me hooked :)

"This story is fast paced and you use a variety of engaging word choices to hook the audience in. I love the way you describe every scene and character. The characters have their unique personalities. This book is off to a great start"

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Well I like the story even though that it was short and I hope it'll continue

"Good It was interesting however it was too short I hope it'll continue "

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Very promising

"It's difficult to judge based on only three chapters, but so far I've found this story to have an interesting plot (it does not follow the usual vampire romance formula but instead is quite humorous) and likeable characters with convincing dialogue. The grammar is imperfect and the writing style could be less...linear? I don't know if that's the right word. Anyway, it was enjoyable to read regardless and I hope you keep writing."

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