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"mind blowing book i'll suggest to anyone it justs gets turns and twists everywhere and the ending o my god i almost slipped my phone due to my laugh wow great the plot is totally different and i just love the way its written and the author's bold comments unexpectedly great book"
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"I certainly liked it. It has a way of making you want to read it over and over. The different characters and how they come together in this book is remarkable. I can't wait to see what this author puts out next."
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"Loved it and enjoyed it. I would definitely recommend this novel to a friend. Keep on writing and if you can, make a second part too. I would definitely double check your grammar and punctuation too. Thanks for the story."
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"I really enjoyed this book, and I extremely recommend for every one to read it. I wish for a part two that has how they get back to their own time and also what happens with Sebastian and Phyllidia, and Orcus and Mallory."
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"I loved this story. The characters were very interesting and engaging. The plot was very interesting and I had a hard time when I had to stop reading - just wanted to read it all in one sitting! My only complaint on the story is that sometimes I felt like the storyline jumped from one thing to a totally different thing without a smooth transition. Often, I had to go back and read the previous paragraph to try and understand how the jump was made. But other than that, wonderful read!"
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"Time-travelling vampire? I thought I heard all about them. However, I have to say that the story flows well. I read a lot of chapters without noticing the hour (and now it's the dead of the night :P). Nice if you want to spend easy hours, with free mind. And now, critics :P Few refusal mistakes should be correct to avoid distraction for readers (i.e. dots are three/dialogues formatting). I'd cut brackets infos or rewrite them because I like to know the character during the story in a natural way. But most of all commas are missing. Comma help the reader to breathe. Good writing Bianca"