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Thunderstorm

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Summary

The lightning crashed. The world was engulfed in a seemingly endless storm.... Jennifer woke up. It took her a while to realize what had happened. Then she remembered the asteroid.

Status
7yrs ago
Chapters
30
Rating
5.0 (9 reviews)
Age Rating
16+

Prologue

The lightning crashed. The world was engulfed in an seemingly endless storm. Jennifer was sitting on the floor with Ben, her fiancé. "I've never seen anything like it," she said.


"Neither have I," Ben said. "The government has been suspiciously quiet lately. Every time I look online to see something about the storm, every article has been deleted."


"Why?"


"I don't know, but-" Ben stopped abruptly. "What is that?'' He pointed at the sky through the window.


"It looks like a rock, but it's oddly large- you don't think it's an asteroid do you?" Jennifer asked.


"No, of course it's not an asteroid, it would've been destroyed by now."


"Hang on, you mentioned that the government has been quiet lately. You don't think this is why, do you?"


"They would've sent a message on the news or something, they can't just not tell us!"


"They wouldn't want to cause a panic."


"Well that worked out well for them."


"No, there has to be some way to destroy it!"


"It looks like it's closer now...."


"No! This can't be happening! We haven't gotten married yet! We were supposed to have kids-" Jennifer cried.


"It's going to be okay, Jennifer." Ben hugged her.


Then, at that moment, the asteroid hit Earth.


And not just the United States.




About a million years later....


"Subject 112 successful, testing 113...."

"113 successful, testing 114, final subject...."

"Subject 114 crashing, Emily! What do we do?"

"Activate operation 77 on her."

"Operation 77? That operation has never been tested before-"

"Do as I say, Doctor."

"Activating Operation 77."

......

"She looks fine, we'll do a final test on her after we release the others to make sure she's alright."

"Wasn't 113 with 114 before the asteroid hit?"

"He was, why?"

"Don't you think he'll be concerned when she doesn't wake up with him?"

"We'll explain to him that we'll do more tests on her."

"What were the side effects of Operation 77?"

"Nothing you need to be concerned about. Now take her to room 114."

"Yes, Emily."

“Yes, Emily.”

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There’s nothing I don’t like about that opening paragraph - good job

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About a million years later...WHAT!!!! hahaahah

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unique words: infinity

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