What is your opinion?
Nice!!
"It was slightly confusing. You could do better by adding more depth to the protagonist so that we'd get to know the MC more. You've got a creative mind. Improve your writing skills and you're gonna be a great Author!!! Good luck ^_^ "
plot was good
"i guess you have a great creativity. But you just need to improve in writing. and that's it. you can become a great fiction writer. all the best."
Confused but great start
"Okay, so I'm confused by the story and plot. Like the first two chapters are filters but they are confusing me. The problem might be because they are short and don't like to introduce the characters properly. Like is the mc male or female? What does the mc look like? How old is the mc? same goes for the villain. Also, there are some grammar mistakes in the story. But other than that the story is going in a good direction. What you really need to do is make the following chapters longer, introduce the characters a bit more, describe characters/settings, and fix the grammar/punctuation. I think that the story can get better with improvement/ practice."
