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marshmellow
evil marshmallow
1 Halloween. The 1st house it was not a human.It was a marshmallow. it went on a rampage. Everyone ran back to their houses.Even me. the next morning. I turned on the news.they said to lock your doors.I didn't i ran up to that marshmallow and put a cracker under it.I put chocolate on it's head and a cracker on top of the chocolate.Then I melted it alive.Then everyone ran out of their houses.then ate it with me.
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