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Captivating

"I'm not sure what I thought I was about to read but I was sury captivated by the characters of Grinda and Mock. The author does a great job in their character growth and building up their love story. It beautifully written and draws you in every chapter! Ridiculously happy there is an entire series for this book and highly recommend everyone to follow the journey of Grinda and Mock."

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The barbarian

"I love it! A good book.i was a bit skeptical about it in the beginning but after four chapters,i got hooked.i love the consistency,the characters&the story itself.the author did a great job"

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Barbarian

"Wow,,,,amazing a very unique novel never read one like this so liked this new adventure ...."

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The Barbarian

"This story was nothing like I expected, but by far one of my favorite reads. I won't give away spoilers, but I think it is more realistic of just how different our perception and beliefs are from reality. Everyone has a story and a reason they are who they've become. Often, our judgement as a society are misguided by stories we've been fed, that only benefit the story teller"

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The Babarian

"The storyline including the wark was interesting. Mock and Grinda falling in love was also great. Not a surprise but great"

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The Barbarian

"This story was very pleasantly surprising. It wasn’t going where I thought it was. All the things I love in a book. Realistic and fictional it is a nice combination. Can’t wait to read the next book. The writing is strong, easy to follow and understand. Beautifully written. "

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The Barbarian

"Wow, just WOW! What a really fabulous story; I didn’t stop crying for two of the bloody chapters!! Incredibly well written and edited. I couldn’t believe I was made to care about the characters and it happened so effortlessly and before I even realised it my emotions had travelled 180 degrees. Superb. "

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The Barbarian

"A splendid adventure that is not for the faint of heart. This novel is well written. It pulls you in and doesn't release you until it's done. I enjoyed the great plot and all the twists that it contained. I would recommend if for readers over 18. "

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Great story!

"This is an amazingly unique story. I couldn't get enough of it and didn't want it to end. A huge accomplishment is for a writer to grasp the reader's attention and keep them up, which is what happened with me. The author did a great job. It could use a heavy edit, but that didn't deter me at all from reading this extraordinary story. It's definitely worth a read. "

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The Barbarian

"This was a great book. The general concept seemed a bit tired at first. The kidnapper/slave love story is all over the place, but this was done very well, and there was an actual plot line that was more than adult scenes and stereotypes. The author created a world and cultures and beliefs beautifully and all of the romance could have been taken out of the book and you'd still have a story there. There was detail and build up without being too drawn out and long winded. I did notice that in the beginning Mock was stinky with yellow teeth and bad breath and dry, scaly lips but by the time they were a thing she was always talking about his soft lips. But I guess that could be attributed to his drinking less ale and more water and keeping himself cleaner. It also could have been perception change as she began to fall in love. I feel like if it was a perception change it could have been brought out gradually to show her change of heart, but this is minor nitpicking. It really was a great book with a great story written by an author with great writing style and technical writing ability."

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The Barbarian

"loved this book! It was hard to read at first but nevertheless kept me eagerto know what will happen. Will make you cry, a lot! THOUGH, the ending made it up ngl. Will surely check out book 2&3"

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Loved every second

"Incredible writing, incredible journey. "

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Awesome

"Great story with action, love, sex, danger, intrigue. The world that the author created was vivid and detailed with a plot and sexy details that kept me captivated. "

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Yes!

"I love it!"

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Great story

"It was a great story!! Excited for the sequel!!!"

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The barbarian

"Am anxiously awaiting the continuing saga. Very well written, the story and characters come alive and right off the page. Seriously read all night, its now 5 am. Just couldn't put it down!"

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The barbarian

"Enjoyed the story,thank you author"

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TRUELY AMAZING...

"The story is intriguing canning compelling very absorbing and fascinating from beginning to end, the book is definitely different from what I was used to reading and it was well worth reading.. Mock and Grinda were meant for each other lord knows they've earned it and it didnt take long for Grinda to fall in love with him if you looked up Bravery in the dictionary you'd see Mock written beside it he's taught Grinda his way of life, the dos and the don'ts, she was already more than what she was zhe alao became fierce in her own right after all, she carrying a very special child inside her I loved how the story begins it gets the reader ready for something spectacular and believe me i know because I've read lots of Great Books and this is one of those Books.. CONGRATULATIONS to you Author for writing and sharing your beautiful gift, never stop writing✌🏽"

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Barbarions

"It is a very good story, has keep me enthralled and interested , there have been times when I was just going to read a few more paragraphs and I ended up reading the whole chapter ! ! "

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Amazing!

"I love this story, the characters, the setting, and the overall plot are great!"

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