What is your opinion?
Neat....
"I have to appreciate you for your writing style...and the story line you choose... I am drawn into your way of expressing the feelings... All the very best for this story... just need to work more in punctuation part."
review
"I think that overall this story has real potential and I would love to read the rest. I encourage you to continue writing! I like the plot, though I would recommend going slow and not rushing it because it might get confusing. Maria xx"
Want to know more
"This is a great story that had me from the beginning. It's unique and deals with a lot of issues in the world today which is something that I don't find in some books. There are a few grammar mistakes in the story. It kind of hinders with the greatness of the story but they can easily be fixed. I can't wait to see where this story goes."
A timely piece with an interesting setting
"Borderline starts of very strongly, and reels its reader into the rest of the story. It deals with immigration, crime and a possible romance; making it a very jam-packed story. Other than a few grammatical mistakes, I would like to know how Borderline progresses. "
