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I like it.

"I liked this poem a lot. Well done :)"

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Not bad.

"I liked this one. The structure starts out strong, which I enjoyed, but the last paragraph you go to less of "You fighting against the world" and switch to a "I will protect you theme." It kinda lost it there for me. However! Not a bad piece of work."

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