The beginings
Hi my name is Grimley Hills. Today I was to be inspected to fight for King Hugo the fourth. He was a over 90 year old man and his son the fifth was a mid forties man who my dead father worked for. the royal guards grabbed my hand and carried me to the palace. confronting the throne I felt pain in my arms from the grip force so I kicked them both in the face and they were out cold. At a point I enjoyed it. Soon I realized that the retired king saw me in action and known I had obtained one of my fathers best traits: Martial arts.
He asked me to stand outside and he’ll meet me there. When I went outside, I could not believe my eyes. It was as big as the Olympian track master field. I remembered entering the games. I also remembered I was second out of ALL 200 teens there. From 12-19 year old's. I'm surprised too cause I am only 15. Soon I saw king Hugo with five other teens. The first one I saw was a guy who bullies me in school named Mike so I didn't care a damn about him. The other was his little brother Leo who follows him everywhere but he isn't so bad just a little talkative. The next person I saw was April, one of my moms students she is very cute but I stayed firm and serious to impress her. Then the next ones there Milly and Pat the twin were there. Milly is a mean girl who dates Mike. Pat on the other hand is a very nice and he's my best friend. Soon the inspection started.
YES
sorry caps
hmm, looks interesting but don't end here, just end at a place where a event is going to start then it would let people hooked to book