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Great Read

"Although the story isn’t finished I throughly enjoyed what I read. The story starts out with a mystery that keeps you reading with each chapter. The main protagonist, Bethany, isn’t the normal cliched lead. I loved how before they were revealed as gods and goddesses the author gave hints of their past. Also the plot is easy to follow and pretty original. Grammar wise there were no mistakes and the author was good at moving the scenes effortlessly. Overall, an entertaining read and I would definitely recommend it to others. 🍷"

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Loved it!

"I loved the mystery in the chapter! It had me excited to read more. The mistakes were nonexistent which left for a great read. I’m very interested in reading on to find out more about the characters and where they came from!"

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Amazing

"I can definitely say that I am hooked. I love mythology and one day, your book will definitely end up in a bookstore. However, I do have a few suggestions. For one thing, your book reminds me of Percy Jackson, so be careful. You don't want to get copyrighted. I also thought that your pacing was too fast. I don't blame you; I know what it feels like to want to get to the most exciting part of the story. I recommend you add more detail and descriptions. There are also a few punctuation and grammar mistakes, mostly with commas. Try using Grammarly; it helps me a lot. Thank you, Ellie"

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