What is your opinion?
The rolkervcoaster named life
"This story is to die for. I had wished thatvit wpuld be a complete stry but I will patiently eait for the follow up book. Plesse makd it quick author "
The roller coaster named life
"Very nice plot and intriguing story. I glued to it"
The roller coaster named life ❤️
"Love this book ❤️"
Amyra n Zachary ❤️
"Love this book ❤️"
True love
"Make me believe in love."
Excellent
"All the things are soo good with beautiful character and i like each and everything about this novel "
Love it
"Love that the characters have a backstory, and aren't perfect people. Overall a great story. Can't wait untill the next update!"
Good job!
"There is just the right amount of description with your story. Just one pointer that isn't always required, whenever you have to write numbers, type them out if they are under 10. It's not a major aspect though, but it could improve your writing style. Overall, amazing work, keep going!"
Potential
"First off this story has potential. It was a wonderful read and has left me waiting for what happens next. There were several grammar mistakes but they can be fixed. There also seems to be little descriptions of characters and setting. I'm looking forward to what happens next."
Compelling
"Even though the concept comes off as rather generic, I see a lot of potential in the plot and definitely believe it will only get better from here. Characters are interesting and the hinted backstory creates an aura of mystery that makes me want to keep reading. Overall, this story is well-constructed and deserves 5 stars. Things to look out for: mostly technical aspects such as capitalization and tense changes. Also more dialogue and showing would make this book even better. I'm looking forward to read the rest. Keep up the good work, you're doing great!"
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"Good job dear Every person must be read this noble"
Nyc Bhn
"Keep it up"
An astonishing piece of writing.
"When you read a story like this you certainly believe the fact that we are living in an era of good writers who have enough calibre to gave complex to the writer of dickenian era. "
Good read
"It is a good read. Captivating interest from the very beginning."
Can't remember
"Love everything about this book when is the update"
Different style of writing
"Okay Interesting"
Interesting
"I find the story very interesting"
This Has Potential
"Reading through this story conveyed a feeling that struck me as rather strange. What appears to be a cliche romance story, with the uptight and lacking girl finding this perfect guy that she then falls in love with, actually finds itself hiding a few dark secrets which are likely to capture the reader's attention. However, I did also find myself rather lost within the story, and I don't mean that in a good way. It seems you may be initially learning how to convey a story with voice and emotions, so I want to address three key points. First and foremost, punctuation and grammar. I cannot begin to explain how lost within a passage I felt when reading most paragraphs, The number of run-on sentences caused by faulty or nonexistent punctuation, weakly constructed sentences, and even what looks to be an attempt at an appositive all threw me off greatly. Fixing many of the grammar issues in this story would likely improve its voice drastically. Secondly, pacing. I'm not sure about other people, but I felt as if the plot is too rushed, not stopping for any sort of detail. The moments that did stop for detail led to another factor which included no detail. I also sensed what could be the potential for endless amounts of dialogue. Combining this with added detail in many scenes, this could not only captivate readers more but also double or triple your chapter length, which would fix your third, though not most important, point of improvement, and that is the chapter lengths themselves. There were very few chapters that actually seemed somewhat long enough to seem entertaining. The rest seemed like either incomplete thoughts that could easily turn four chapters into one, or they were just lacking in detail. I felt myself almost speeding through areas in the story that could easily take a full chapter, possibly even two, to give complete imagery and event occurrence. Looking through some of the other reviews and comments for your creation, it seems your story has become rather popular with some of the users. However, I personally do not believe this to be considered the essence of a new generation of writing. That said, I do believe you have great potential. The mistakes that have been displayed through what looks to be an interesting story are rather common among those who have attempted to write a story, and I understand that it's not the easiest thing in the world to depict a legendary piece of work in mere hours; it takes time. You have great potential, and I believe with time and dedication, you can easily identify and correct every mistake I've pointed out thus far, as well as find your own unique twist that will result in your unique identity as a writer. The stone may be rough, but the right care will polish it into a fine gem. You're doing great, so keep it up!"
Great job!
"The writing is amazing work. It's not too descriptive and there's not overloads of it either. You did an amazing job, keep up the good work."
Lovely
"Waiting for updates "
