What is your opinion?
Breath-taking
"This seems to be a really good and addictive book so far. The plot is really good, unique and something that gains the interest very quickly. Your writing style is good too with a touch of simplicity which makes it even more intelligible for readers of all variety. In all it is really good and I am waiting for further updates, but please consider including the translations too for those certain words you used. "
Amazing Start
"You've got remarkable talent in writing; especially in the fantasy/action field which is the category I am assuming this story falls under. So far, the characterization was quite mesmerizing and you have established the setting of the story very seamlessly on your first chapter. It's friendly to readers and easy to understand. I like how you chose exotic (for me, at least) names for the characters and places so that it exudes a unique atmosphere for this original piece of writing. The ending got me hooked, and I'm looking forward to the future chapters. Well done!"
