What is your opinion?
Interesting
"The title of your story is really catchy, any readers attention could grab here because of the title. The title you pick for your story its somewhat matches with the plot. Storyline is quite different. Yes I have read this kinds of books on wattpad but your one is different from others. There were some grammatical mistakes even I do have too. But have to work on that. Overall the story is fab.👌"
Excellent
"As a fellow African, I was really happy to read a book. A few grammatical errors. But overall all amazing plot and diversity. Keep up the good work. I am proud of you "
A good Story
"I don't really know about sports so i don't know what to say but your story is really good. Wish you good luck!"
Snowball100
"Love the diversity and plot line!"
the girl and the player
"It was really a good plot and u story is nice too i really like it but some grammer issues thats all.Every writer faces this issue its ok to make mistake because from mistakes only you can improve your writing style .But your story plot is really good i liked .Your story will surly reach the top u will reach the top too ALL THE BEST FOR < 33"
The girl and the player
"I really enjoyed the story! Had an amazing experience, great plot, never read anything like before, love it how u mentioned Kobe Bryant (RIP). Some grammar mistakes and writing style problems but nothing serious. Enjoyed it and waiting for updates 🤗"
Totally recommend 100 starts if i could!
"It's a really interesting story and i seriously can't wait for an update, i love your writing style but while writing dialogues, do consider writing it in separate sentences/lines to be more understandable. There aren't really any grammatical errors which i found really impressing as that's rare for most authors. The book do need a bit of editing, in the beginning i couldn't understand at what person the protagonist was talking about, cos in the first chapter, her dad and mom was talking, so how did she know? it would have been better to write that part in third person Overall it's a really good read and a total recommend!"
Different but interesting story
"I have not seen anything like this story before, and it's got me hooked. I like the main character's personality and I am waiting for an update:)"
Strong characters...
"From what I last read the book, this book was completely unedited and I can see the writer has put in great effort. This book got my attention from the start and I really loved the strong characters. Nicely done. .."
Interesting!!
"I really loved the plot, and the characters, not to mention how diverse it is! I love her confidence and her personality, I would love to be friends with her! You struggle a bit with your grammar and writing style, but that can be fixed easily. Overall, I love the book, and will always be waiting for new chapters! Keep it up and never stop writing xx 💜💜💜"
Good one 😋
"Yeah your approach was really appreciable but I found that you lagged somewhere. Your title would surely attract us...😉. You are fabulous yet like me you too are facing the grammar issues... I just hope I didn't showed you down..😣. You are creative so you have more pressure to perform well. Other than that I am waiting for the up 😋🤩"
Reviewed till chapter 3
"You have a nice book cover and it really draws attention. The title being the most common among high school students draws a lot of readers. Still, the story is diverse and doesn't constrict to one age group. It has a nice and light plot. You excel in character building which most of the new babies struggle with. Now coming to the author's writing style, it is very unique but a little bit of changes would be great. Your grammar is a bit weak and we did point out some mistakes in chapter 1 . A little advice, revise chapter 1 and 2 as they have some grammatical errors.. Other than that you have a nice plot building, character building skills. Don't let something stop you from writing. Anyway nice work and see you around..."
Great character :D
"I really loved the main character! Her motivation and determination really kept this story going. Great job on that! I would really suggest just take a break from writing and go back to edit what you have. There are a lot of grammatical errors that really just ruins the story’s flow. But other than that, I think it was a great read. Keep it up! :)"
