Prologue
PROLOGUE
“I’d rather die on my feet than die on my knees, Leones. I’ll do everything I have to do just to control this power. I won’t let it take over me again. No one could take over me. No one…” I said. Wiping off the blood on my chin.
“This isn’t just for you anymore, Seb. This is for the whole guild, the whole Kingdom and for Victoria.” Leones said, and with the sound of her name, I quickly looked away. “You still didn’t see her?” he asked.
“Soon… Soon, Leones. I’ve still a lot to do.” I heaved a sigh. “I don’t want to hurt Victoria again. So maybe it’s better to be far from her for now.”
My life should’ve been easy it wasn’t for this ring. I wouldn’t hurt Victoria if I had just controlled it. But I’m such a weakling. Augustus was right, the title of being an Ace V doesn’t fit for me.
No description? Where are they at? What do they look like? Seems dialogue heavy, too much tell don't show. FIX IT PWEASE!
Yep. sorry it was hanged due to our work load. It was a team collaboration work that's why its still pretty short on descriptions. Hehehehe.
Would definitely consider adding more to this prologue. It doesn't really pull the reader in