WonderCyy

Pasig City, Phillipines

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Uniquely amazing

This book gave a new twist on fantasy, and the plot seems really interesting for me. Although there's some points I want the author to consider improving.
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-Grammar errors. It's obvious.
-Punctuation errors. The use of three dots(...) and overuse of exclamation marks(!) Exaggeration isn't necessary, leave it to how you construct the words that'll struck your readers and to your writing voice to give the conviction. Its no need for(jhsdlh!!!!)
-Sentence construction. There is certain parts I read as confusing. Consider revising your whole chapters with only the plot on your mind and without looking for the first version you made, keep the original version. That could help you determine that changes.
-Improve narration, use much simplier words I guess, so the readers wouldn't get confused.

That's all. Other than that, thumbs up for the Author. This is a unique work! Keep improving and this soon will be a blockbuster. :)

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The use of grammarly and the other one weren't really for Fiction purpose(In my own opinion) because it turns your words seems to be forced. It hadn't me hooked, my curiosity hadn't plucked out but my confusion did.
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-Paragraph and sentence reconstruction. I find the whole story confusing.
-Redundant word appear here and there.
-the conversation doesn't feel real, I can't feel the characters.
-The story turned out to be monotonous. I can't hear the Writing voice.
-World building and Character build up was insufficient.
-The first chapters seems not to give me any Plot build up and Character development.
-Right use of terms, tell us who's POV is that, referring only to three(First person, Second Person or Third Person POV)
-A research will also help

This book was good, I'm seeing the plot very well. But you need to consider revising this whole book, improve it and bear in mind those points I have given you :)
Goodluck Author, I'll be looking forward for this book.

P.S. this is constructive criticism, All i want is to help you Improve your book/s.

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Full potential to be unleashed

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-Paragraph spacing, so It wouldn't look too long reading it all.
-Grammar mistakes, spelling mistakes.
-Give more Descriptions, play with the words. Don't just say that straight out in your sentence. That'll help drastically.
-A revision would work this out. The Plot was good, the story was good flowing, but a revision of this right now is a must. I suggest you write again your chapters in an empty paper, only your plot points in your mind and don't mind the first one you did. After you finish constructing a new version of your chapters, compare what you just did to what you had published here. You'll see the changes(especially if you keep in mind these points I give)
-Proofread your work, track down those verbs ending with -ing and edit them(i.e., Running, walking) and delete those -ing's while reconstructing your sentences. (I.e. Running becomes Runs)
-Your story came monotonous to me, you might consider putting much Intensity that'll pluck the strings of curiosity. That'll will help you get more hooked readers to binge read.

P.S. This is constructive criticism, I just want to help you improve your book.

Other than those, this Book has a potential waiting for you to unveil, just bear in mind those few points I wrote in this review. I'll be looking back on this book soon again. Goodluck Author! Thumbs up for you!

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Creatively surprising

After the first time I read this and after the authors took in my review to make there book better makes a good difference. Now I can't say anymore, I'm no professional and Sir G C Fer and Shinku-san are both Good writers, better than me, and tbh they're my IDOLS. Their book is a real inspiration for me to improve my writing! Thumbs up for taking my advice Senpai's! I can't wait to read more of your books when I come back.

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Full of Potential

While scanning the first pages, there's some points that really caught me up to halt.
The story potential was really good, but i have to pinpoint some important parts:
-The narration was good, A bit over with words i think, and some obvious repetition of words.
-There's also some grammar errors, look very carefully on that or your readers might misinterpret it.
-Info dump on Blurb
-Lack of hookness.(I suggest on this part that you don't spill everything on your first pages, just make it cool, and make suspense your greatest friend on writing.)

Continue improving those points and surely this will soon be a blast!

As I said, this has a big potential. Thumbs up for the author! It was a good work!

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Just clap and clap

This book was well written, vivid imagery, and enticing paragraphs. It hooks me though, although there's some points to consider revising which was already told by one of the reviewers here, nothing to be pointed out more. Just continue improving this book and its full potential will be near to be unleashed! Hands down to the author! All I have is claps for you!

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SUPERB!

Okay, first and foremost, I had read pretty a lot of contemporary romance(YA and Teenfic) and so I decided to move in on Fantasy(Fantasy and Scifi is my thing right now.) before and finally came to the point on seeing it as boring since a lot of writers give that cliche scenes that comes to not be that realistic, but this Novel, just as when I though I was totally done for Contemporary romance came into my view. The mix of emotions, the elements and the writing style of the author made this a superb work! Other than some minor paragraph mistakes (in which the sentence got cut up and brought into another line), I've got nothing to say more of this book. Big Thumbs up for the Author! I'll be looking out for your other books! I'm now a fan of yours!

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PERFECT!

So far, with all the book I give reviews, this one was almost perfect. The grammar, flow of words, character build up, world build up, plot. All was well written! All I can do is give this slow claps *clap* *clap* *clap*

Just one advice, please divide your paragraphs to smaller groups, I've been having the hard time to read it because the sentences were too packed up in your paragraphs. Other than that, I can keep my mouth shut up and enjoy reading the rest of the chapters.

SUPERB WORK AUTHOR! TWO THUMBS UP FOR YOU WITH SLOW CLAPS!

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BLOCKBUSTER

Werewolf genre is much of a common. I've read a lot of book, different versions of this certain category, and this is one of those I could consider Good. There's still more to wait, since I've read this only until chapter 5 since It's only the available at this time. The writing, the descriptions, it's all good. I can't wait to see more :) Thumbs up author!

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A good Potential

So, I've noticed this story while scrolling down to read some stuff. The Blurb was so intriguing that I immediately read this story even though I don't actually read stories with few chapters published at the time.
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-The plot was good, it was one of the best I've seen so far through the post-apocalyptic genre.
-The writing was engaging, but it lacks something. Maybe a lot more of droplets or hints about the Character background, and some more descriptions will do.
-So, base on my observation, This would come up into the category of a YA Fantasy/Sci-Fi /Dystopia novel,, in that case maybe you could work on lengthening the word count for each of your Chapters, so as your readers wouldn't feel like as if 'something's missing'. Maybe try targetting a 4k word count for each chapter since it's the normal word count for such genre.
-I would suggest you an advice that was given to me a long time ago and I found it really worth it; avoid using words--especially verbs ending with -Ing(I.e. running, talking). Mostly these words could be replaced(i.e. Runs, Talks/talked), this would turn your sentences much better.

These advice's worked out for my own book, and I share it also to you. Other than those points, your writing was good, and this book has more to give. Continue working. Good job Author! A thumbs up for you.

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This "recommended" doesn't fail the word

This book was so captivating that Words are not enough to describe how good it is. It gives a different taste to one of the most common wolf genre stories and books i read so far. I was even convinced to immediately give a review on this book after reading just few of the first chapters. Superb work from the author can't wait to read the rest of the book. 👏👏👏

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Superb!

I'm hooked. This was really a fantastic work ate strip. You've done really good on this. Though there's some grammar and punctuation mistakes, I finally catch up reading the rest from where I halted. I've got nothing to say from here. Two thumbs up!

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This book is very interesting...

From the blurb to the rest of the teaser, this book offers a lot. One of the best constructive writing I've seen just like the other famous authors that I loved. You're gonna be hooked from the first page, and I'm sure I'm gonna buy this as soon as possible.

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