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Amazing

"An incredible story of wlw live. Especially long distance! The underpinnings of it all just added depth!"

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Our young funny voices

"Absolutely brilliant story. Well written, suspenseful and compelling. Cannot wait to get stuck into the sequel. Don't give up writing you're doing amazing :)"

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I truly appreciate your work.

"Awesome book which kept me on my toes while reading. "

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Beautiful!

"Thank you for this short work of art. Totally loved it! The plot was amazing, and the characters were well written."

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Beatiful story

"Always a pleasure to read your book...good writhing..continue please🤞👍😁🌈"

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Totally engaging !!!

"I just love the way the characters have a deep connection and acceptance of each other."

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Our young funny voices

"Loved this story and looking forward to reading the next book "

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Our Young Funny Voices

"Thank you for sharing this overwhelmingly beautiful story. You're obviously drawing form your own experiences well as the story is so gripping and relatable. I love the moral of the story. It's not just about blood related family. Sometimes the best family is the one we make ourselves. "

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Inlove

"I loved all of it, I laughed, I cried, I got angry and It made me happy, I definately would buy it if it was paperback! Cant wait to read more of your stories lovely! "

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Amazing

"Your work is beautiful Sophie. ❤️👌🏻"

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Loved it!

"The only sentence I love so much to represent the whole story : "thank you for loving me." Maybe life is not only about love. But in the end, knowing you are loved by someone unconditionally and then you tell them "thank you for loving me", I think it's the best feeling ever. But unlike Francine, she has to deal with a fact that Vasha let her go, but, like what I said, "thank you for loving me" made everything's so perfect that they meant to be together. Once again, I love the story you wrote! ❤️"

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OYFV ❤️

"This book had me laughing, screaming, and crying!! I don’t leave spoilers so all I can say is read this book. You won’t be disappointed. Francine and Vasha are beautiful together. Their journey is incredible. "

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Shawnna

"First off I would like to say to Everyone reading this review or wondering if this is a good story... READ THIS BOOK!!! I really love this book!!! It is a great story about romantic love and hope, that is Very Very authentic in my opinion. I believe that love can be very challenging in this time that we live in. I feel that so many of us have some type of baggage entering into Any type of relationship. In my experience, these days that is kind of a typical part of living a life. I also believe that we all wear some form of mask to hide our vulnerabilities, to protect ourselves. With that being said... This book is an excellent example of an authentic romantic relationship. Romantic love isn't typically, (in my experience anyway) something that's easy breezy, hearts and flowers, constant joy and happiness wrapped up in a box with a big bow! It can be wonderful, exciting, fun, adventurous, blissful and incredible...but also, challenging, messy, painful, lonely, sometimes heartbreaking very hard work...But sssooooooo worth it!!! Anything worth Really keeping is worth working for, and this book brings that exact fact to us, up close and personal! I believe everyone can relate to this story!!! "

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Lovely LGBT story

"I enjoy your style of writing. Francine and Vasha’s story is very touching. I also like how it’s not typical. The happy ending didn’t come easily. "

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As a hetero😂😂😂

"Wow. Sophie, you have worked so hard on this book, I needed to re-read it again. Sometimes I wanted to skip some paragraphs because I was too impatient to know what came next. I'm such a freaking slow reader...Anyways, I've always thought your writing is so fluid. I need that. The only thing I noticed was that there were a few typos here and there that I could tell weren't intentional. Like extra letters, etc. "

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I love this book.

"I think you’ve portrayed your characters really well. I can’t put this book down! I’m also glad to see you update your story often 👌🏻"

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Believable protagonist!

"The story is engaging so far! The emotions are relatable as Francine feels trapped in a job and a relationship she doesn’t really want to be in. I think many people can relate in some level. I enjoy her people watching as it lends to her personally and the description of the setting. The writing is good. There are a few grammar errors but nothing that can’t be overlooked and nothing too jarring. The LGBT angle is a breath of fresh air. I usually enjoy stories with the leading male characters being part of the LGBTQ community, however, I find the female lead to be quite believable and so far subtle, which is a good thing. Good work!"

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Hooked!,!

" Your writing is perfection, I love the story and you have such a good way of describing your characters! Well done, I'm adding it in my reading list.. go Girl!"

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Very good novel so far.

"This novel is very suspenseful as it is also very juicy. This person took alot of time to think through the characters and I think they will develop quite nicely. "

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Our Young Funny Voices

"-I liked how kind of different it is from the typical slice of life genre of novel, since it tells a situation of a different culture clashing with what we grew up. There's just instances where the scene will drastically change from one moment to another, not giving enough explanation or whatsoever. But all in all, its a refreshing story that discusses the real life and environment the LGBTQ+ people goes through. Super thumbs up! Hope to read more stories like this😊"

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