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My little mate

"A story with different plot.The story is really lovable.It makes me smile while reading the story of the adorable Nikki.I love it...but unfortunately it is removed.so sad of it."

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Magical Love

"I love story an can't wait for more updates so I can see how everything turns out "

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My Little mate

"I am loving this story so much hope there are more chapters to come so keep up the good work "

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Nevermind the naysayers

"I really enjoyed your story. Keep up the good work. Only through writing do you become great. Keep at it. Everyone is not going to like your work. Focus on those that do. Write to express yourself. That will impress the fans. I'm a fan. xoxoxoxo"

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My Little Mate

"Absolutely love everything about this book. I would also love a sequel to it if possible "

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My little mate

"I like the plot and story line The author just have to do spell chekcs The rating to me is appropriate "

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My little mate

"Can’t wait what will happen at the end. A bit of suspense though. "

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good

"can't wait for the next chapter. update soon"

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My little luna

"What I dislike is that there are no other family members for baby nikki. I like core and I like the fact that he didn't reject his little mate and I also like him for the patience that he's exercising.i would recommend this book to my two friends elizabeth and thandiwe "

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My little mate

"Plot is good but spelling is bad. The story is good but hard to read parts because to many words misspelled and parts repeated."

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My little mate

"Plots good. But hard to read.english as a second language? Understandable. Good so far though. "

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Nice idea

"I luv the idea behind the book But thats probably the only thing that i like about this book..🤷🏻‍♀️ Sorry but.."

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Dangerously close to pedofile

"I read through "Naming Ceremony" and couldn't go on in good conscious. I know this is fiction, but it is wrong in the male taking the 2 month old baby to bed with him. How did she know she was two? Why didn't he search through the car for items for the baby or possible identification of the mother to know the baby's last name. Didn't call emergency services to report it either. It's just very creepy him being an adult . The fact that the story is basically told as if the writer is speaking stilted...broken and it just doesn't make any sense.. Please I urger writes to read your stories out loud to yourself and as well as a few friends. See if the sentence makes sense to you. Do the words flow properly as if spoken by an English person. Your stories are being marketed and seen by an English speaking crowd. Try to google some of the words and see their meanings before entering them in a sentence. Does it make sense to use that word? Lastly whether humans found the baby or wolves, instinct is making sure the baby is okay, fed, warm and finding her family if she has any relatives still alive and or family to watch over her. It is not okay in many cultures to take an infant or underage female to bed, even if just sleeping next to them, specially when that female if your infant mate. Very taboo."

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