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Awesome book

"So far this is a good book and a great series can't wait to reread it for the 3rd time "

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Wastelands:Book 1 if the Godsfall Chronicles

"This is a terrific awesome book, I am lost for words. You have made the characters come alive when one is reading. The planning and delivery has come together so well, it's like you lived this story. Finally I would say your book is good enough l, go ahead and publish ....what are you waiting for???? Minor spelling and grammatical errors etc. will be taken care of by the editor😊😉 Now moving on to book 2 and looking forward to it🥳🥰"

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Recommend

"Every book has been a fantastic thrill. Many ups and downs, with plenty of surprises. "

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Wastelands: Book 1

"This book kept me enthralled to the very end! In all honesty, it could have been 3 books. Now I I'm hoping there's more! Cloudhawk is what I've always considered to be nearly ideal. Neither 'evil' or 'holy' but a mix of both that makes him more human than either. Great story."

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Goog

"A good story ti ready. I think Is perfect for a Netflix serie or similari! I enjoy this reading "

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Great story

"The best story I have read in a while , it's worthy the time."

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Wasteland:book 1 of the Godsfall Chronicles

"Wow Truly enjoy reading your work. I just love the way your mind when it comes to your writing Really enjoy reading"

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I couldn’t put it down!!

"General and slight grammatical errors but definitely didn’t take away the suspense, adventure, action and intrigue of this novel! What a great read! Every chapter exciting and the writing style immersed you in the story. Can’t wait to read the other books :-)"

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Wastelands: book 1 the godfall chronicles

"I’m a sucker for a really long book, and it’s written by an excellent author. It’s similar to “the lord of the rings”, and the “dune” trilogy. I love the storyline but some battle scenes can be a bit long. It will please those who like video games. I definitely want to read the next two books. My only criticism is it needs a good proof read for spelling and punctuation and some grammar. An excellent read. Bill Lesburg"

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Wastelands:book 1 of the godfall cryonics

"Awesome book from chapter 1 to the last. 5 star rating. Keep this going"

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Wastelands: Book 1. The Godsfall Chronicles.

"The author has produced a saga that could easily rival Tolkien’s lord of the rings. The characters are at times endearing, but mainly brutal; life in this world could never be a bed of roses. There are mistakes, which are to be expected in a novel of this length, but nothing that detracts from the tale he has woven. I would love to read a fully edited and published version which I hope the author should and will achieve. "

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Wastelands: Book 1 of the Godsfall Chronicals

"Another wonderful story that had me captivated from the start. Can't wait to read the next book of the series. Very enjoyable."

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Incredible

"Your writing style is awesome, the build up and world building is great, and the protagonist is awesome, truly an incredible book"

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Amazing

"I couldn’t get enough of this book! From the build up, through Cloudhawk’s growth, to the end of the book is a masterpiece! I am following the uploads of book 2 and checking everyday to see if there are new chapters uploaded. I do not like when a book has multiple main characters and is written from multiple points of view at length. This book has one main protagonist that it focuses on and when it switches perspective it is always important to the story as well as short and sweet. Absolutely the best way of writing a fictional book like this in my opinion!"

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WasteLands: Book 1 of the Godsfall Chronicles

"Your book is the only thing I’ve ever longed for. You bring all these characters to life in my head , like a 3D This book is perfect and I’m waiting patiently for the rest"

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A very detailed well thought out story.

"Overall the writing style is very detailed and sucks you deep into the world of the writer. It's well worth the time it takes to read all the details. So settle down with a cool drink and a snack and enjoy! Totally on a must-read list!"

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Very Good!!!

"Your writing style is very beautiful. You rarely have any Grammatical errors and your very descriptive but you can oftenly be too descriptive. You don’t want to spend too much time describing because people will get bored and leave your story. Something I learned the hard way. Other than that it’s pretty good!!!!"

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Very descriptive

"Only the prologue and I'm definitely intrigued. The descriptions really give you a mental image and that's what I like, being able to read the words and play them like a movie in my head. I'm not sure if I can do a double review but as I read in I may want to update this further. "

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Visually stunning world building

"I’ve just started this book and I’m already impressed with with authors ability to visually paint the scenery and bring the reader into their world. It’s done so effortlessly that it doesn’t hinder the flow of the chapters. I can’t wait to read more."

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Something else, very original.

"The story ends too abruptly. It needs a propper ending"

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