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What is your opinion?
Exciting So Far!
"An earlier review mentioned some grammar issues, which is why the technical skills only have four stars. I can't wait to see where the story goes from here, it's really gripping from Chapter One! I would like to know more about this world (so... world-building??). Is it a future of our world? Is it something else entirely? Be sure to have strong background. Keep going! It's great and worth continuing!"
Hooked
"You had me hooked from the very start. Only a few grammar issues, but that can be fixed with Grammarly. You have such a talent at writing, keep it up!"
