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Break the Rules!

"I won't say that the plot lacks anything except some spices. I will just say that the central idea may not be new one but you seemed kind of a person who knows to play wit the words and plots to make it interesting.."

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Descriptive

"The strong point of the work was how you had described all the details. However, there were punctuation missing in a lot of areas and there were quite some spelling and grammatical errors that disrupt the flow. If not, the character descriptions and development have good scope. Keep going!"

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Beautifully written <3

"I absolutely LOVE your writing style. You did an amazing job, however, the plot line seems a little cliche. But some authors intention is to make their stories cliche. But, if you are not one of those authors, I recommend adding a little spice to the story."

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