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What is your opinion?
Imaginative
"I love it when writers try their hand at writing something outside the box. I can see that the author has a very unique imagination and I applaud her for that. Good use of vocabulary and a nice plot. Keep on writing, this was very different fit me and I really like it. "
Reign
"The story is very promising, but the world-building falls a bit flat. Although very imaginative in general, you should consider enriching your descriptions instead of having your main character spitting out information. I also suggest using an online editor regarding punctuation as there are quite a few mistakes. Overall, the plot so far is interesting. Keep up the hard work!"
