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Revi5

"In liking it thus far so I gave 5 stars so far so good"

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Quite a Beginning

"Just three chapters leaves the reader wanting more. Beginning gives just the right amount of info."

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Hidden Marks

"This story is too good to put down! I've seen the post on pinterest and I was just wondering when someone was going to write it, so here we are! I can't even put into words how much I love this, but I do have a theory. In the post, I saw a comment where it was her hair or something that could naturally be a mark, so I'm wondering if that's the case. Also, I'm 99% sure Jocelyn bumped Cohen. I'm in love with your book and can't wait for the next update!"

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