What is your opinion?
Great
"Very interesting won"
Because You Said Yes
"The characters were very real-feeling, you talked us through understanding them emotionally, and plotted out a lucid and fluid storyline. Now, you really need to finish this story!"
Miss
"Hello hello hello"
I lovvvvvveeeeee this
"Amazing please keep writing "
Rare
"The story has a good plot so far. I'm eager to know where it leads. The writing could use some work, but is very minimal. Best of luck! "
Great
"The characters in this story are very well developed. The story is interesting and hooks you quickly. The world this book is written in is unique and beautiful in description"
Not since The Hobbit has anything this awesome crossed my path
"Girl you did something majestic in these pages. This is recommendable stuff pure and simple. And be proud of your skill, it's something to envy. Overall you are a brilliant writer... Write on! :D"
Review
"Very interesting story so far"
it’s going good !
"Maybe make it a little less confusing it’s very descriptive and i love that"
Off to a good start!
"Everything's great so far. I'm enjoying the story, though it's not what I usually choose to read. I'm glad I stumbled upon it though! I took a star off from plot because the story is still developing quite slowly and it's hard to judge at this point. However, the premise is brilliant and there's potential. One other thing I would like to comment on, is the layout of the chapters. You may want to format your paragraphs better and add proper breaks in between so the chapters aren't just walls upon walls of text. i also understand that you write through the app? In my opinion, it's tough to write on mobile. unless you're just making edits."
Because you said yes
"A captivating start. It makes the reader very eager to know what happens next, and the story is very well written. Keep it up, and I would love to see how the story continues."
None
"Good grammar. Good spelling"
