What is your opinion?
nice explanation
"Hey! This story captures so much raw emotion, have you ever thought about explaining this moment, like her first tear, through illustration? It could really show her heartbreak visually."
Heartbreaking beautiful
"So, here I sit in the cantine eating lunch and enjoying the rare reading time I have. Every noise fades away while reading this. Your writingstyle is very good! It captivated me. The only thing I can advice you is to take another look at the length of the long paragraphs. Some can be shorter. Thank you for uploading this!"
Memories of a Broken Heart
"Man is a fragile creature endowed with the resilience to bounce back from the chasms of destruction in all things. The unmistakeable truth about love is that love hurts but within that pain lies our propensity toward an unrecognized power to love again, again, and again and to forgive. I recommend Memories of a Broken Heart to everyone who chanced to love, who've faltered and risen to continue to love. Oh, and be mindful to have a box of tissue ready at your disposal!"
Memories of a Broken Heart
"The story is well written with a natural flow that brings the story full circle. The descriptive details and literary techniques creatively immersed within the written text adds a depth, which allows every emotion to pour forth into the readers heart and soul. Love, pain, heartache, regret, anger, longing, brokenness, emptiness, despair, excitement, expectation, hope, shock, realization, finally acceptance and surrendering to fate. The author takes you on an emotional rollercoaster ride fueled by the vast array of emotions emanating from the pages of this story. I truly enjoyed reading this story."
Interesting
"I liked the plot a lot, it is very interesting and intriguing. I hope to read more, good work keep it up."
Bittersweet and haunting
"This collections of short stories revolves around the topics of love and loss and allows us a glimpse into the human soul. The language is beautiful and descriptive, showing us the feelings of the protagonists. Especially the third story is real gem, bittersweet and full of melancholy. It's about love that could have been but was not meant to be, the imagery of darkness woven into the plot in a really lovely way."
good book.
"WOW! just WOW! this book is awesome I love your way of writing and stuff. It is so cool I can't even say it in words. Keep writing!"
Review
"This piece had me captivated by the detail and flow as it was constant and ridiculously captivating with so much beauty in the style."
Enjoyable stories
"As in every SOSimons book, the reader is amazed by her capacity to let the writing style and the character currently described fuse together as it was a single identity: when the female characters of this book are addressed, the tone becomes soft, elegant and somewhat sweet, while as soon the male character comes in, words start to become strong and sure, as to describe the direction in which the situation is turning thanks to him"
Unique
"This was really nice story. The description was good and differentiated your story from others, but I do feel like it was a little overwhelming. Other than that...your vocabulary was perfect and the plot was amazing!!!"
Bitter-Sweet Short Stories
"An interesting concept of writing short stories about reuniting with a past love or crush and watching it blossom or fall into the abyss. The writing style is beautiful; however, at times so descriptive that can easily be a bit distracting. Otherwise very good."
M(oa)BH -too descriptive?
"Being super descriptive is great and can really help set a mood for the book. However there is such a thing as too many words crammed in to describe one simple thing. If that makes sense. But overall, you're really good at putting in those details and descriptive words. It sets the scene beautifully and adds something special to the way the characters are portrayed in our (the reader's) minds. Your very talented, it just needs a little more love and care. But great start. Lots of love, - V"
