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Celestial Mechanics 101

"Loved the world idea, has a nice bit of world-building. The feeling of being overwhelmed and powerless by a superior force is well done. I like the characters and the setting. I could follow the story easily enough. This is an excellent story to launch more from if the author wants to continue playing in this world. This story only requires 2 Beers (6 pack - Rating). Good fun. Length: Overal I thought it was just right for the content created. Characters: They had flaws and personal issues wich felt real enough for me. Celestial Mechanics: Could follow the rules once they established. I could read another book in this setting."

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Kadero

"Interesting..good read! "

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All Hell Breaks Loose

"Really liked this story! It says completed so I hope there's a book 2 or something 🖤💙"

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All hell breaks loose

"Interesting read."

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Quite an interesting read

"I actually really like it. Your grammar is clean and it is easy to read. The Plot was good, but it did not have me compleatly hooked (sorry).This might or might not change later on. Your idea behind this story is also really is good. I definitely liked it when you highlighted the differences between characters. Keep up the good work and I might just subscribe to that"

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